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Review:ElissandrAnne says:
Andy,

I read this for the first time like... ages ago! (Well, okay, when you published it.) And I truly thought I had left a review. But obviously, I didn't, which is unforgivable, of course.

When the character of Tonks was introduced in the HP series, I thought about what being a Metamorphmagus truly implied. Can Tonks really turn herself into someone else - meaning that a Metamorphmagus wouldn't need Polyjuice Potion - like she does in this fanfiction? Is it an ability that a Witch or a Wizard can completely control - or do her/his emotions always get in the way?

And I guess you thought about it too, because part of your story is devoted to the one big question about Metamorphmagi. If one has the ability to change one's appearance, how much is it tempting to do so and spend one's whole life that way? Because I don't know one person who wouldn't like to change at least one thing in their appearance. It is human to feel rather insecure that way. Yet when Tonks transforms and Charlie can see her normal appearance for the first time, he thinks she's even more beautiful than when she's wearing a 'mask'. There are fluff and cliches in this story, but real depths too.

I knew Charlie and Tonks were in the same year at Hogwarts, but I've never thought of them as having been involved. And I cannot help but wonder how many guys would like to have a girlfriend who could turn herself in any of their fantasies. Hm... Maybe not so many, after all. It may be fun at times, but weird the rest of the time. Because when one loves, one loves a person, not just their appearance...

I'd say you did a good job here or I wouldn't be leaving such a long review. lol.

--Anne

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