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Review:isteppedonsnape001 says:
I'd like to start by saying that this will not be a particularly long review. Lengthening it would only entail some form of redundancy and repetitiveness; highly unnecessary because it can be summarised by merely a few sentences:

You are a wonderful writer. Sure, I've only read the sixth and seventh chapters but I believe I have read enough to support that. Your writing style doesn't focus on the raw emotions themselves, but how they really appear, and it doesn't at all work against you. It fits this story and your characters seamlessly.

Also, I've never read a James/Lily fic like this before, never having been much of a James/Lily fan unless the story was fluff and involved Sirius but I digress. I like how you described James and Lily's married life in the sixth chapter; it's very realistic, to the point that it made me sort of think "Hey, that's right. They would have felt that way" and etc. I particularly enjoyed the part which narrated how Lily and James had begun to grow apart. Of course, the Remus/Marlene story cannot be ignored as well.

All in all, your use of existentialism and realism has been exquisite. Your readers will have much food for thought/imagination after reading this fic.

Author's Response: I haven't known what to answer, which is the reason for this late reply. Now that's the apology had been made, onto the reply: I'm glad you liked my James/Lily version in this story. Exploring their married life was refreshing, because I haven't read much of their marriage, more of them at school and it's nice to try something else... Argh, seems I can't do your review justice, but nonetheless, thanks so much a hundred times. This review meant a lot =)

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