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Review:Browneyes101 says:
Here I am again. :)

Know before we begin, I just want to make sure that you remembered my reviewing rule that I don't type on my post. I only review two chapters at a time you can come back and review for two more chapters when the slots are open, but I do want new people to review at my post too. Though I do hope you post again I really enjoy this story. Now, time to begin.

This chapter was very interesting at the beginning to the end. I really liked at the beginning when Marisol was introduced. She is a very interesting, and I really like her character. The growth of the characters have expanded since the first chapter, and I think that that is a extremely important to me. I think that allowing the characters to grow like you are is a great gift to have; this is a tribute that best-selling writers have. This is how good I think you are.

There is no bad news to put here. I would like to remind you to that I only do two reviews at a time.

Hope I helped. Keep the fantastic writing rolling.10/10


Author's Response: Whoa, thanks so much for another awesome review! I really enjoyed writing the beginning of this chapter, it was very fun to write. As with the rest of this chapter. And I'm finding that this story has got easier and easier to write as I get closer the end. Which I'm pretty sure there will be either 11 or 12 chapters of this as of this moment. I'm almost finished with chapter 10 and I can see the ending to this story clearly now. I am actually daydreaming about how to write the ending while at work or sitting in class or even when I'm driving down the back roads where I live (yeah, that can't be safe :P lol!) and I haven't even got to it yet.

I'm also glad to hear that I'm doing a good job on building the characters to grow more. Thanks again for reviewing and I'll be sure to stop by to request reviews for the next two chapters in a few days. ;)

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