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Review:Browneyes101 says:
Here I am once again. :)

I have to say that I am very, very sorry for making you wait. Their is no excuse for me making you want this long. Please, I beg you to for give me. Now without further adue, your review (That rhymed hehe.)

First off, I would like to say that the beginning was awesome! No, I'm not joking. The flow was also excellent. You didn't go too slow and you didn't go too fast. I really liked the sarcasm you put into Kelsey's personality, and put some drama in that you put in it too; I think I speak for everyone when I say that drama is excellent when you think that nothing is going to happen. The Fred and James part was funny, and of course we need funniness.

This is where I put the bad news/suggestions. But, in this chapter there is no bad news. Not kidding. This chapter is as close to prefect as a writer can get it in my eyes, seriously. I know I'm saying that a lot, but I don't think you believe me.

Hope I helped.10/10


Author's Response: It's not a problem at all. I don't mind waiting for reviews. The wait is what makes getting reviews even more better because they catch you by surprise and I like being surprised.

I'm glad that the beginning flowed smoothly. There were a few spots that I ended up editing after I first posted this, so it's good to hear that it flows better. And I'm glad you liked the whole drama that I added with the whole Kelsey thing. Also, I'm happy that you found James and Fred funny as I find that humor is the hardest for me to write.

Thanks so much! I'm glad that you enjoyed the chapter. (=

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