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Review:Ariana_Gryffindor says:
Hi this is Ariana from the forums.

i really don't know what to say to you about this, it really blew me away. The depth of the emotions you used were really good, i also loved some of the imagery you used. Esepcially one line about startling an owl and its dark silhoutte coming up against the glow of the moon, also the line where he felt he was drowning in the blue of her eyes.

i could not see any major grammar mistakes so that's all fine. Oh and i love the representation of the rose he sent to her each month yellow for friendship. Although in the end i sort of expected him to bring a different colour as a sign of sorry but i t is nice that it was still the symbolic yellow one.

Mr Malfoy, i like how you portayed him in this fiction story, i believe he would still have the views from his father and since he was death eater even if it was for a little while that old habit die hard and it would be very difficult to come back from how he was back then. To completely change your lifes views after so many years of thinking them.

The touch of death that was the end of Rose was sweet in way, it was... i don't know how to say it. as if showing the sacrifce he went through to get her and the sacrifce that in the end she gave in love of him, but it also shows a reasonable amount of guilt in Scorpius afterwards and also the strength he needed to move on.

keep up the great work,
Stephanie @0o0@

Author's Response: wow thats a deep analyisis :P thanks so much for reviewing, im glad i havent made any grammatica errors, my typing leaves something to be desired! thanks for reviewing!

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