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Review:DragonGoddess says:
O_O What an ending!! I really hate Cho in this...already. I hate those possessive kinds. Yech. Anyways, so sorry it took me so long! My comp crashed and I use my uncle's...(okay, enough of that)

A good start. There are some editing that this chapter requires. Apart from that, I am etching to move to the next chapter with the cliffy, but not sure if I can. Oh, you could've added more description to this chapter. That's about all the criticism I can give..

Great start...am continuing to hate Cho...she's just so...air headed. But, would she call Hermione Mudblood, dear?! My guess is...she wouldn't...But, it adds to my hating factor :D Burn in hell Cho Chang!!! RAWR!

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks so much for the review! I appreciate it. :D

I was hoping to start off somewhere with a bit of suspense and then into the middle of the story; i.e. Harry and Cho are dating. lol! I didn't want her to seem so "evil" from the start, but with the title and all, I thought it would be good to make her seem "possessive" of Harry so the readers would already start disliking her character. lol! And that's what I got in most of my reviews. :) I don't hate Cho Chang, but I just don't like her as much as the other characters. ;)

As for the editing stuff, I didn't pay much attention to it because 1) My story was already getting a lot of reviews for the first chapters and 2) I didn't know how to get a beta during that time. LOL!

But thanks once again for the review! I'm glad you liked this chapter and thanks for reading!!!

-Samhria


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