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Review:Ariana_Gryffindor says:
hey this is Ariana from the forums here to review.
i liked this is was very well written and you do very well when it comes to descriptive writing and analogies.

Your grammar and spelling was good too i only found to mistakes which i will point out to you.
"but fell free to continue with the compliments" ~ fell should be feel.
"Ron used to call be “brilliant, but crazy.”" be should be me.

Other than that i liked it. They did a lot of dancing didn't they, i think it was three times and i love how you made Harry i hopless dancer it the first time they danced and he stepped on her foot was very well written.

That's all i have to say
Keep writing
Steph @0o0@

Author's Response: oh thank you so much, that was soi kind of you to say

as for all of the dancing, yeah, this was actually an entry for bella's beatles songs challenge and i got the song dance with you (if you look at the quote in the beginnign it's from the song) so i felt i shoudl pay homage to that by havign it as a headlinign activity in this fic

THANK YOU!


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