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Review:Sunflower says:
Hi:] I'll start with the less fun things:

Line nr 9: There's a different tense there than the rest, you've switched to present instead of past, the same goes for the 4th and the 5th line-break. as well as the 10th line-break in the very last sentence. There're a numerous other places where the same problem appears and I think you should go through the piece again and decide whether it's in the past or in the present, you can't have both.

I loved this bit:
Her love for him was strong just as mine was for her, the only difference was that she got her happy ending. - heartbreaking, wonderfully so.

It was very well-written persisting the confusing switching between tense's. Heartbreaking and sad. Wonderful my dear:]

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