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Review:M_And says:
That my friend was a brilliant story, and what a fantastic seed idea. A peanut butter sandwich! I should point out that the toasted peanut butter sandwich is better using english muffin bread and either peach or blueberry preserves. What? Like you've never used anything other than grape or strawberry! lol :)

Anyway... I really did mean it when I said you're story idea was brilliant. I once took a summer writing class. The whole weekend was devoted to writing short stories based on ideas just like that - wish I'd had an idea as good as that (or a story for that matter). Nicely done. My only critique is you could still use more description of scene/ setting and maybe a bit more of the thought processes going on inside of your characters, but other than this was great! - M

Author's Response: Awww thanks. Your reveiws always help me and make me feel better about myself and the story, so thanks.
Yeah I just suddenly had this idea, so I decided to start writing it and see where it took me. Its a bit shorter than I wanted it to be originally, but like you said, I wasn't big on the details.


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