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Review:ButterflyRogue says:
Gustav is a bit of a show-off, isn't he? Another competitor for Luna's heart, maybe? ;)

A very nice insight in Rolf's thoughts and feelings following the little incident with the niffler. I liked that part very much.

Sorry this review isn't longer, but I'm really eager to read chapter four... ;)

Author's Response: Yes, Gustav is definitely a show-off and the reason why I created him was because I wanted him to be in contrast with Rolf. Luna sees them as these two different guys, one is adventure and thrill and the other one is a balance. So she doesn't really has a hard time deciding which one but for her is essential to see that there are differences and big ones for that matter.

I'm glad you liked the insight I offered into Rolf's mind and particularly after the niffler incident. He really is confused about Luna and her capacities in that field and feels like there are people who could do much more better than he would.

Don't worry about the length of this review, I'm so glad that you're actually reading and enjoying this story. In fact, your reviews are one of the most delightful I've got so far.

Thank you!

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