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Review:ButterflyRogue says:
Oh, I loved this chapter very much. Kerri's inner struggle was very interesting to read!

Also, I'm starting to get interested in Yestin and his grudge towards Remus. Is it just because he had moved from the commune or is there something more to it? And what about Tonks? Is there a more important role for her in further chapters?

Once again, I have to mention how much I admire your way to describe the background events, introduce many different things that make the story more livid, like the part with Royal and what the ministry did. It also portrays the life of a group of people shunned by society and introduces another important theme aside from the obvious, love theme. I gives a lot of depth to the story and it is obvious everything is very well planned.
Very well done!!

Author's Response: I'm ashamed to admit it but I'm not 100% sure yet where I'm going with Yestin. I'm not sure if he's just a jerk or if he's truly evil. On the surface he dislikes Remus because he knows Remus has tried to pass himself off as a normal person....beyond that...I'll just have to see how his character develops with time.

Tonks is Kerri's best friend and she'll be important throughout this story and all the sequels. I even have a husband picked out for her -- Teddy's father --- although Teddy obviously won't have the last name "Lupin" in my version.

Royal and Celestia are important characters too whose importance will grow with time. Unlike Yestin, I know exactly where I want to go with them.

Thanks so much for your review.

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