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Review:Ollie Vander says:
Aww, that's really sweet. It's so detailed, and so beautiful.
Two little things;
1.) Your tenses jump alot, which makes it annoying to read...so if you ever decide to edit, be sure to fix that.
2.) At one part you said he had "four wonderful children..." but you only describe the three canons.
Still, nice job.

Author's Response: hey ollie!!
Ill go and check on the tenses, thanks for pointing it out. Yea, I said 'four' because Harry thinks Teddy as one of his son's rather than a godson but Ginny only talks about her three children. if you get me.
thank you! =]


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