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Review:cnewk says:
Thank you for no cliffhanger especially to the betas for stopping you from doing so. I almost cried but didn't because I had hope and faith that you wouldn't killed her off. I have hated Lawton from the get go b/c he reminded me of a bad mix of fudge and scrimgeour and you just increased it ten fold the nerve of calling harry someone who runs from problems, I have to admit that part of me is mad at you for having him say those things b/c you wrote it but I feel like giving you grace (not that you need it from me) and I realize that is his character.

Author's Response: When my daughter had me read her my rough draft of ch. 11 after she proofed this chapter for me, I knew the cliffhanger had been poorly timed. Once the next chapter has validated, though, this chapter will return to its originally planned length (and ending).

I also detest Prof. Lawton. To me, he represents everything that is still wrong with the Ministry in one person (arrogance, incompetence, a lingering distrust of Harry). Chapter 12 goes into much more detail in the inner-workings of the Ministry in its current state.


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