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Review:JLHufflepuff says:
This really captures the essence of the angst inherent in teenage love, especially forbidden teenage love! I like it that it's from Scorpius's point of view looking back with many flashbacks. It's done very well.

I like how you have Rose challenging everything Scorpius has been taught to believe, and even though she angers him, she spurs him to change. The way he shows the change in him by rescuing her from that situation is great.

Draco's reaction to finding out that they are owling each other is perfect. I really like your characterization of him throughout this story.

I thought the proposal seemed premature, but it does work for the emotions of the story. If that hadn't happened, then the tragic ending wouldn't have happened either. I feel really bad for Scorpius at the end and hope he can move on from guilt and realize that even without her, the changes she made in him will always be present.

Author's Response: scorpius is tough, he'll manage :P thanks for reviewing, im glad you enjoyed it

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