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Review:HarryPotter is my LIFE says:
Good. I really liked it a lot. It wasn't boring, it was just slow-paced, as all first chapters are. I liked the descriptions that you used, especially in the beginning.

You used the traditional characterizations of the Marauders, but I'm sure we'll learn more about them in later chapters?

I really have nothing bad to say, other than that the dialogue between Lily and her mother was a tad rushed.

But, so good! I absolutely love Lily/James pairings so I'm very excited to keep reading! Well done, and continue writing!

Author's Response: why thank you. and yea i like those characters, they're the ones i fell in love with so yea and why change the classics? yea everyone has their little fairytale ending OOPS revelation. lily's mom dialogue was a rush because her mom had to go and her mom is very bad with goodbyes. anyways thank you for the review and please continue reading the next chapter is up!

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