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Review:Gords7015 says:
Wow, I didn't see this coming. There were a lot of neat little details here, and I think now is a good time for me to comment on your technique of starting each chapter with a little flashback. You do this quite often, as you know, and I think it is really effective. I especially like how it connects back upon what you are writing near the end.

So Vernon gets the boot, Petunia quits her job, and she is ducking her parents. Hmmm, I hope it all gets answered in the next chapter, because I can't wait to see what happens!!

Nice chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks for the compliment on the flashbacks. Now that I've had a year to look over my work, I've realized that I do need to step away from that format. I think I grew way too comfortable with it, and it's time to stretch out a bit. Not with this fic though. Since the format is already set, chaning seems silly, but with one shots I think I may experiment with something else...

Thanks for the review again!

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