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Review:Gords7015 says:
Well, I mean its got to get boring of me saying, "great work," but again you've knocked it out of the park. I mean, how you make stories about original characters interesting is really unique. My only critique is that not that much has happened yet. I get the tragic loss, and the being alone part, but I think that one thing that is mentioned in book one is that Lily was coming home and turning saucers into toads, things like that. So, maybe there needs to be some sort of magical activity going on...

Otherwise, nice chapter!

Author's Response: Ah, and that is a very fair critique. I think I've been very slow in getting this thing moving, and it's fair enough to say that not much has happened yet. I suppose that in trying to keep Petunia as normal a character as possible, I've made it so that her story is getting a wee bit dragged out. I've got a timeline for this, but that's about it. This story is really just going to be a collection of memories...

I'll try and put some more magic into these in the next chapter, becuase you're right, this IS an HP fanfiction...


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