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Review:Gords7015 says:
Ahh, Lily manages to salvage the situation again! I keep seeing glimpses of Petunia's adult character, yet you keep pulling it back. Its done in a really neat manner, and you write it so well. There are a few typos here (the bit about bubble after bubble, you have a comma with a space in the wrong place), but otherwise, this is just a really fun story to read.

I thought James freaking out and not giving Petunia the cat was funny, although I'm curious as to why he calls her a "woman." I mean, she'd only be like 14 or so right?

Otherwise, great chapter and great story!!

Author's Response: Ah yes, the typos need to be fixed. I hate it when there are typos in my stories, becuase then I feel badly when I point out mistakes in other people's stories...I'll have to remember to fix that up, so thanks for pointing them out. :)

Er...well, seeing as how Petunia is fourteen and James is an eleven year old boy, I think that Petunia might be a bit of a woman in James' mind. But perhaps that should be fixed up too. I'll add that to my to do list...reread that area and see if I can't find something better to put instead...

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