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Review:Gords7015 says:
well, this is an interesting chapter. I think you're right, a tight family can have some tough times when one of the children leaves for school away from home. I felt bad that Mrs. Evans overreacted to Petunia wanting to read the letter, but then again, I'm sure the tension was high...

Just a great chapter (the whistle is a really creative touch), and I look forward to seeing where this is heading! I hope the actual letter is happy news! Great work!

Author's Response: 8makes icky face* I honestly think this chapter is the worst in the story. I don't like how Petunia's mum reacted...

Actually, Petunia's mum has been the most difficult character to write. Unfortunatelty, she's morphed in this story into a bunch of things...like, she's kind, and crabby, and just...a mixture of a bunch of different mothers, which I'd like to change if I ever get to revise this. She's too inconsistent in personality, which needs to change...

Thanks for the review Gords!

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