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Review:Gords7015 says:
Well, this was another really good chapter. I think you can see a bit of Petunia's bias slipping out when she said she didn't like the leaky cauldren because it was dirty (perhaps her cleaning mania was showing there...), but the fact that she was excited to see the alley is also really neat and shows her age.

The story about the turtle tank was also a cool bit of magic as well.

Its sad that no one remembered Penunia's birthday, but I hope that isn't the only thing that sets her onto her path of hatred...

Great work!

Author's Response: Forgetting a birthday really shouldn't be something to set someone into pure loathing...I don't think...

I'm trying to make Petunia as rational as possible in this story, mainly because she's so darn irrational in the books. Hopefully, in later chapters, I'll be able to push her even farther down...

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