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Review:Gords7015 says:
Hi Serene!

So, as you might have realized, I went on a reviewing spree today to go through a lot of your stories. I love you writing, but I think that I've always had too many other requests to jump into yours. However, since no one is requesting at the moment, I told myself that since you've been such a fantastic reviewer for me (and really helped my writing), that I ought to check out some of your work, expecially your chaptered fic. I have to say that thus far in this chapter, you're done an excellent job. I particularly liked the bit about her conscience, and how it makes her feel bad. That totally is something I can see. My only question is the bit about the Statute of Secrecy. She isn't a witch, so how can she break that? Is there some sort of thing she was suppsoed to sign? I think that might bear further explanation...

Otherwise, great start, and I'm looking forward to seeing where this story goes!!

Author's Response: Oh, that's so nice of you! Answering all my questions, I think you do more for me than I do for you. ;)

Before I start, I'd just like to mention that I've been working on MoP since the very beginning. Chapter one of this fic was the second thing of fanfiction I ever wrote, so I really like to think of this story as showing my progress as a writer. You couldn't have picked a better fic to check if there was any growth as a writer on my part.

The Statute of Secrecy, I always imagined, was put in place to hide witches and wizards. Since some muggles are aware of their existence, I always assumed that they had to keep quiet too, otherwise they might be obliviated or something. Like, a muggleborn's parents would have to know about magic, right? So that means they have to keep it quiet too...

As far as a form she has to sign, I never really thought of that. Perhaps I'll mention something like that in later chapters...

Good catch!

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