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Review:Gords7015 says:
Well, I figured that since you gave me such amazing feedback on my first story, I really needed to come and check out your first attempt! Ok, so impressions here are again that you make your characters who are normally hated seem human, which is a pretty unique talent.

I only spotted one grammar issue, when the healer is talking to Fenrir's parents and tell him that there are "to options" I think you meant "two." Otherwise, the story is perfect.

I can't believe the level of skill that people like you have on their first go. It just makes me realize that I have so far to climb on the ladder to even come close to reaching the talent level of some people on this site...

Great story!

Author's Response: *hides in embarassment* Oh dear...thank you so mcuh for liking my first attemtpt at fanfiction. At one point, I re-wrote this entire thing, but didn't have the heart to fix up my embarassing first try.

I realize there are plenty of mistakes in this story, and I fixed them...but they're stored on my computer only. I added in a bit more description between dialogue thingys and of course, fixed that bit up. Kinda funny, actually...since now when I read other people's things I pick up on grammar errors pretty quick...

Thanks for the review, Gords!


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