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Review:MajiKat says:
well *clears throat* wow. that was, erm, rather quick...i wasn't expecting that so fast, but at the same time, it works. its like, the close, the ending of her desperation to have something of him. to catch him, i guess.

one can only wonder where things will lead between them now... im very intrigued where you are going to take their relationship...

and my other question has been answered - i see now why she was so intent on him. if i was meant to see that before and i missed it, sorry!

excellent work. i love it and i'll be waiting for updates!
kate xx

Author's Response: Yeah, I was worried about having them get together so quickly. But in the end this was only supposed to be a short story, I was planning on only 5 or so chapters (which may be extended depending on how the rest goes) so the pace had to be fast. I'm glad you think it works though :) .

I'm quite excited about writing the rest of their relationship actually, so long as I can manage to write it how I was thinking of doing it. We shall see; I've re-read the story back to myself, and I know how it ends and roughly how to get there so hopefully you'll see an update soon. Thanks for your great reviews :)

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