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Review:Harry_Potter_Mom says:
I really enjoyed this chapter. It gave a lot of insight not only to Hermione, but to Draco as well.

The howler from Ron was a nice touch - that is something he would definitely do. (One small thing though - in the howler, you say, "...YOU DON’T DESERVE YOU! YOU REALLY DON’T!" I think perhaps you meant... "You don't deserve HER..." If not, ignore that! :D)

Can't wait for the description of what Hermione looks like with the Glamour Charm removed. The term would hint that she looks better now than with it off, but I'm guessing it's not like that. I wonder if Ron and Harry will recognize her or think Hermione's been replaced and stolen away, since I'm sure she won't look the same.

Okay... as always, let me know when a new chapter comes up! :)

Author's Response: Oh my goodness!! Thank you so much for pointing that out!! Yes I did me "You don't deserve HER." I think I even remember seeing that when I was reading through it but never changed it! Sometimes I can be such a blond! Lol... Anyways, thank you so very much for your thoughts! They really mean a lot to me! I'll be going through today to fix my chapters of their grammatical errors that you pointed out to me before... Hopefully I'll get them right this time, however I won't be going back to re-post the chapters for some time I have many other things to write and prepare for in this story!!! *smiles* Thanks so much for all of your help!!

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