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Review:Malfoy_Lives_On says:
I'm back. =]
This is a very sweet story. Usually in one-shots people try to cram everything together, but you wrote yours in a way so that it wasn't crammed together, if that makes sense. I love how Scorpius narrates the story. It makes it very believable.

There are a few spelling errors again, just with left out apostrophes and stuff like that. Nothing un-fixable.

Draco Malfoy was protrayed well, but I think he would be less... harsh? I still think that he has that pure-blood loving thing in him and I could see him killing Rose but I think he would be a bit less harsh on his son. (After all, he always lived under the shelter of his parents).

But still, great story. =] I can't wait to read more from you!

Author's Response: aw thanks... i kind of regret making draco so evil, now. but it worked with the story line, so he'll have to be OOC for this story :) thanks so much for reviewing!

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