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Review:Pingo says:
This was good once again, but I felt that the last paragraph was a little out of place and charactor.. I don't imagine Draco as the kind of person who would want to fall in love.. Though he does in some stories and I realise that it's important for the plot, but I don't think he's "supposed" to be in love with a woman.. And the whole thing about wondering who it might be seems a little off too..

The other thing that's a little weird is still your conversations.. It's very difficult to pull it off great and you need to work with it still..

But otherwise it's very good.. I like the plot idea and the whole story generally.. The only reason that I may seem a little harsh on you is because I want it to be perfect! Hehe..

Good luck with the rest.. Please come back to my thread..

Love
PIngo

Author's Response: I will go and get a beta for this story. I think once I get a beta, the conversation and characterization will improve in the story.

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