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Review:Harry_Potter_Mom says:
Hello again... the story is coming along quite well. I enjoyed the garden scene - again very well written. Good descriptions.

I still look for more in the way of a better closure with the Grangers. I'm glad that Hermione's starting to realize her haste in leaving and her bad behavior.

The letters from Ginny and Molly were a nice touch. I did feel that Ginny's and Harry's were a bit too well-written... almost too proper. But that's just me! Ron's was good... I can see him writing that!

The memory was very good and the prophecy was very good. I'm very interested in the woman who gave the prophecy as well as the second memory.

I didn't see any spelling errors, so yeah! Let me know when you update again and I'll be happy to take a look. :)

Author's Response: You know, I agree with you on the letters from Ginny and Harry... I was having a bit of trouble with those and couldn't really figure out how best to change them... Once I get a bit more time to go back, I'll look at them again and see what pops into mind... Thanks for the review!!

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