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Review:xX mOoNdAnCe Xx says:
Lovely one-shot! =]

I loved how you kept switching between the past and present - it really helped to give more depth to the whole Sirius/Lily relationship. And your descriptions were beautifully heartbreaking. Or heartbreakingly beautiful, whichever way you prefer =]

Sirius exhaled. "Way to throw a wrench in a good-natured conversation." - I adore that. It was just so... Sirius. And JK Rowling-esque, if I might add.

And was the Sirius/Lily pairing inspired by Harry Potter Shippers Unite? Hahaha! 'Cause my new one-shot definitely was =P

Anyway, another wonderful piece from you, Layla =D

-Jessica-

Author's Response: Aw, I love how you read everything I write. It's so amazing. Anyway, no, this was not inspired by Harry Potter Shippers Unite. Actually, I have no idea what that is. I just entered a challenge and got a quote to work off of. I ended up with this piece of junk. :P
Well, it is very nice of you to compare me to Rowling. Such a thing is not true, but it is nice nonetheless.

Thank you for reviewing. Stay awesome!


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