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Review:paratrooper321fa says:
I am American Army, go figure with the name above , but I know a little about the British Army. Their Special Forces equivilent is called the Special Air Service or the SAS but there are several other SF groups all are Airbroen Infantry regiments as a side note.

Dudley Lavender is an interesting mix I am looking ofrward to see where this is going.

A couple thought about the next chapter
how the 2 met?
Uncle Vernons response to his kid marring a witch?
Is Lavender Part Werelf now?

The story is a little short but the prolouge gets a spoldi 8

Author's Response: Thanks for the info on the SAS. That's the sort of reason that I will be editing as I write this. I should have researched it first, but got caught up in the flow of inspiration.

You will see how the two met in future chapters.
You will see Vernon's response to both Lav and Harry coming back into his life, as well as troubles with his health.
I'm not going with any werewolf theme, I want to get that out right now.

Yes, this was definitely just an intro chapter/prologue. Future chapters will run 2000-3000 words, most likely.


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