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Review:ElissandrAnne says:
Andy,

Did Gubby like your story? When you told us about this challenge, I must admit that I was like: "I could never write such a story!" And I wondered how you would be able to... But I must admit I forgot one very important point. Luna could turn any thriller into a humorous fluff. She is Luna, after all. I did forget, you obviously did not. :D

The way you - your narrator - address the reader made me smile or laugh each time it happened. And love at first sight between Sirius and Luna? It is so not realistic that this story is probably the fluffiest story I've ever read! But it was good to see Sirius alive - I loved your explanation, by the way.

Good job! You definitely have a gift for Luna/Sirius fanfics... Maybe I'll challenge you! LOL.

Huggles,

-Anne

Author's Response: Anne, only you could write a lengthily review about something as bogus as this fic! I think Gubby liked it - or at least I hope so, considering I made fun of her challenge! :P Really, writing this story was great fun...at one point I actually got up and did roly polies because I...well...felt like it!? :P


With the 'thriller' aspect of this story, I got the feeling that no one would realise it was there unless I blatantly pointed it out through narration. I'm really glad those bits made you laugh - I giggled whilst writing. Unrealistic? What rubbish! They could SO fall in love at fist sight! :P Haaaa! *runs away from challenges*


Thank you for leaving me such compliments for such a ridiculous story! I’m glad you enjoyed it! ~ andy x x x


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