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Review:LadyBlack_ says:
This seems to be an interesting story line so far, however your grammar and spelling are pretty awful. You might want to look for a beta. Sirius is spelled Sirius, not Serius. Please use you instead of u, because that makes a story a lot easier to read.
And you might want to use more punctiation as well. For instance, instead of “Harry I’m in it with you to the end so tell me please” Tonks said
say “Harry, I’m in it with you to the end, so tell me please”, Tonks said.
You have a couple more spelling errors, try running a spell check over your text.
Please use capital letters at the beginning of all sentences.
Otherwise, the story line and plot seem quite interesting and I look foward to reading more. I loved the banner, by the way.

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