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Review:Lunnah says:
Sorry this review took so long!
First of all I liked all of the elements of this story. The description in the beginning, the dream, the flashback, and the incorporation of Draco. These are all strong concepts and I thought it was all very heartfelt. One thing I did have a problem with was that Draco was out of character. I didnt have a problem with what he said necessarily, but just how open and random he was. Your grammar and vocabulary are great! Some sentences are a bit redundant and I think some paragraphs could be condensed to make a stronger point, but overall I think this was a very well rounded chapter. Great job!

Author's Response: Sorry it took so long to reply back to your review. Almost 5 years. Lol man i'm slacking.

I'm glad you liked the story and took the time to share your thoughts. I appreciate the flaws you pointed out as well. Before I quit writing I had planned to write a novel explaining the OOCness of Draco that also tied into my other story Petunia's Change. I'm not sure when but I will redo Petunia's Change and also begin the novel that explains everything including Draco.

Hope that cleared everything up for you and thank you again for reviewing =]

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