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Review:hogwarts_witch says:
Okay, first of all I just wanted to tell you that this was a really good story! You really kept me guessing how it was going to end. The ending would have to be my favorite part :) That was really... cute.

Anyway, I did notice that you had quite a few spelling and grammer errors. Sometimes I saw that you either forgot to add a word in a sentence, or simply added a word that didn't belong.
Here's just an example:
"month after wedding,"
-You seem to have forgotten the word 'the', which I'm sure you know and just made a small mistake. Everyone usually does that, so it's nothing to really worry that much about.

But I do suggest going back to try and fix all the spelling and grammer mistakes. It would probably make the story better to read if you didn't have the mistakes.

Besides those things though, the story was great! I really enjoyed it! 9/10

Author's Response: aw thank you, i'm so glad that you enjoyed it!!!

p.s. thanks for the notes on my grammatical errors as i didnt have a beta to go through this so that'll really help me with fixing the fic

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