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Review:Elf_ears13 says:
Ahhh, lovely! The quick back-and-forth pace really had me expecting another flashback, but I think you ended it at a very good place without venturing into the land of contrived. There was a lot a lot a lot of dialog, which wouldn't have worked in a serious story, but because you have the humor spot-on I can't disagree with the choice now.

Some of Lily's lines seemed off, even for a hormonal, pregnant woman, but you captured the Marauders really well. Speaking of, where was Peter? I would've liked some small reference to him, since I doubt they were suspicious of him yet. Just a small, 'James wished Peter could have helped him, since he had experience with a little sister, but he was off on vacation ... ' or something to recognize his relationship with the Potters.

Anyway, very enjoyable!

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