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Review:queen_luna says:
Hi, this is queen_luna from the review forum!

Grammatical notes:

"It means exactly what I've been telling you for the past year Harry, what you've only started to pay an inking of attention to a month ago."
--I think you meant "inkling" not "inking."
"He chocked slightly"
--Choked is spelled like that. :)
"Don’t worry love, I ever do act like a wanker you have full permission to hex me."
--You're missing "if"

Okay, enough of that stuff...

That was some really good writing. I can't imagine Harry being a "narcissistic pillock" (LoL!) but your descriptions totally made me believe it. I like Hermione's character a lot too. AMAZING one-shot. :)

Author's Response: wow, you certainly are a well-roudned reviewer, i am so glad that i came to you for assistance lol!

anyway, as far as youre ocomments go, any grammatical one's cannot even be argued given that i ahve serious issues with typos and word doesnt seem to catch half of them (damn lol) and it seems as if no matter how many times i go through a fic i seem to miss somethign :( lol

but i'm really glad that you were able to enjoy it regardless as i am aware of the fact that it is extremely AU in the sense that... well harry is a "narcissistic pillock" lol, so the fact that you were able to ffind soemthing likable regardless of the fact that i semi-ddestroyed the honorable image of harry means so much to me!

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