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Review:momotwins says:
Wow. Highly intriguing. I love that the Aurors have cover as MI-5 agents, that's brilliant. And using guns, good one there. I am confused as to how someone born in 1988 was in school with the trio (born 1979 (Hr) and 1980 (R and H)). Is this an AU timeline? Another point, JKR has said that Muggle technology goes haywire around magic (Hermione mentions it in GoF too) - there's an interesting article about it on the Lexicon called "When Magic Meets Muggle Technology." At any rate, extremely interesting story, although I agree with other reviewers that Fred as a zombie is disturbing :( Poor Freddie. Excellent writing, and I'm excited to see more of little George Krupp.

Author's Response: Well, the answer on the dates is: I simply screwed up, not supposed to be an AU timeline. I'm going to have to write it out and correct it, since George is the same age as Teddy Lupin. Thank you for catching it.

The technology point is something that I was aware of, but it's something that
Conner, the new chief Auror has a work-around for, as he wants to modernise the Aurors and use both magic and Muggle techniques.

Thanks, I always thought that Aurors would need Muggle covers or they would have to use way more memory charms than ever, especially with the proliferation of video web sites. It would be very easy to quash a video as a MI-5 agent, but not so easy magically.

Thank you for the nice review. I do intend to use George again in a future story, in which you'll see that Fred wasn't exactly an Inferi or a zombie, but something more.


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