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Review:Tomboy54 says:
It was a nice chapter, but I'm a bit confused here. What is going on with everyone? I don't really understand what the story is about. I'm guessing I'll know what this story is about after a couple more chapters, maybe? I am wondering what the main plot is though. I am also wondering, is there really going to be slash later? Slash is just wrong with these characters. Sorry that's just my opinion. You know I have alot of opinions on pairings. That doesn't mean I won't read this. I am definatley going to read this. Just, please don't go into detail with the slash, ok?

Ok, I'm sorry. I feel like I'm saying nothing nice. Sorry. Sorry. Sorry. Sorry. One more time, sorry. It was pretty well written. You need to work on the grammer thing a bit, but what first- time writer doesn't? It's mainly capitalization and spacing, but other than that, it's good. Once again, I'm sorry. I don't like not being nice in reviews. (Hard to believe. I know. Shocker!)I'm just telling you this cause it is the average stuff that new writers miss here. Trust me, I have read enough to know. I have been reading basically for the past seven hours or so today, and still going! My eyes are very flexible now! Ha ha! Sorry. Off subject. I am going to apologize again, sorry. I can't think of much to say.

I'm confused on where this story is going. I need to know exactly what is going on to write a full three or so paragraphs. Don't worry. I'll probably make my way to that. You should see how short my first reviews for Ladybobcat54 were. Compare to those, I'm doing very well. If you're wondering why they aren't three paragraphs long like her current ones now, it's basically because she tells me all about it in even more detail than what the story says. And anything I don't get she tells me. Also she tells me anything she is willing to tell me about what is going to happen next. If you want longer reviews, you do the same (please please please please I want to know more about your story, you won't tell us anything) Oh, if you listed it, I didn't see it, but what year is this?

Ok, this review is long, but I was asking you and saying stuff that didn't go straight along with the story. Once again sorry.

Anyway, update soon please.
(and trusted authors don't suck, it's something you've got to earn)

Author's Response: Well its just Harry trometized from Dumbledores death. So he kind of becomes gay. Ron somehow got this sixth sense power. And Godric just wants to be part of the action. Oh by the way it is the seventh year. There just has to be a little slash but I promise I want go to far. he will adventually become streight.

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