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Review:Rashel Quinn says:
hey .. the beginign of the story was a bit confusong .. he is all wondering y she hates him .. and suddenly few paragraphs later .. they booth r telling each other they love each other .. ? well in case i misread please let me know .. or mayb u cud adjust that part of the first chapter a bit .. but after that ...i loved the story .. some parts were hilarious .. and ofcoz some were scary .. and some sad ... so anywayz .. the story is really good .. update soon :D ... do u have this story on ff.net?

Author's Response: well, i just want to start off by thanking u for reviewing lol. but i didnt realize it was confusing...it probably is because it doesnt start off from the very beginning and u have to kinda use ur imagination to know what happened up until that point. haha this explanation must be confusing too. idk... the whole part where Scorpius thought she hated him is a miscomunication.

and no its not on ff.net...its only here lol. but im glad u liked the rest of it and i will update soon :)



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