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Review:Onora says:
This was really believable and I really love the realism about your stories. One of the reasons I'm not a huge fan of dramione is that most of them were so implausible. Would Hermione really like Draco? How would they ever become friends? Seen by the way she acted towards him in the books, I don't really think so. But however, given a amazing little one-shot like this one, I think I may have to contradict myself. :)
It was just lovely; you shoould write more one-shots like this.
The characterisation of Draco was great; you've always been good at that. I think you may have overused words such as 'frustration' and some others. Try to think of alternate words in your writing, hun.
And that's basically all the advice I can give you :P
Your just too good, m'dear ;)
AND FINALLY - I've gone on long enough, me thinks. =]
I heard that your a validator now; congrats! :D

Author's Response: Thank you so much! That is really something that I strive for. See, I can picture them coming to an understanding or even a friendship, but I can never make them fall in love. I think I'll try it maybe, like, once. But thank you so much! I really worked hard on this one.

Haha, I probably did. I really am going to have to invest in a theasarus, huh? I'll definitely try to work on that one.

Thank you so much! And thanks for the congratulations, too! It may put of a hold on some stories that I've been working on, but I'll try to do as much as I can! :)

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