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Review:Aurora Dawn says:
Hi Morgana,

In this chapter, Draco is the thing that has my attention. Like it says in the story, Draco is in essentially the same position now that Harry has been in for most of his life. He seems to be going through a lot of changes. He doesn't seem so sympathetic to the dark side and he's starting to show some sensitivity for once in his life. At the same time, there are still flashes of the old, arrogant, obnoxious Draco, which I think is good writing on your part. I'm very interested in seeing where you plan to take Draco's character.

One thing I've noticed is the way you qualify some characters -- Draco in one case by saying "exclaimed the young Malfoy." It just seems a little awkward to me.

Other than that, well done. 10/10 as always.

Author's Response: Well, I wanted to play with Draco a bit. In fact, I thought that JKR may have done something like this (well maybe not as extreme) but do something to force him to come out of his safety net. I definitely expected at least one casualty in the Malfoy family but not necessarily Draco himself. This was the last chapter written before DH in fact. You really have flattered me a lot here. I'm glad that he is credible. I think it would only take a change in his circumstances to mould this character a bit. Of course, he is not going to turn into a "goody good shoes". As to what I do with him next, well you may have some fun with him and Harry... As for how I refer to him, yes, I agree with you, this sounds awkward, I think I'll change that description for something else that fits better.

Thanks so much!


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