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Review:dracomalfoylover123 says:
Wow! That was amazing - espicially how you handled the different tenses with such ease! I am forever stumbling on tenses (She ran, she runs, she'll run or whatever - can't really muster up a good example!) And it was subtle - she did show lots of emotion but not like most stories where they ramble on about the OCEANS of tears the characters seem to contract within an instant. Very well written!

I look forward to reading more of your work! Many thanks, Becky x

Author's Response: Aw thank you so much! And with me, don't worry about tenses. Just write and then go back to edit.

I'm glad you thought it was subtle, I didn't want to go overboard, but I wanted my audience to feel it, you know? Thank you so much for saying that.

I keep saying thank you, but thanks! Reviews keep me writing. =]


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