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Review:JLHufflepuff says:
I really like the quality of depth you have in this. You really make the reader sympathize with Remus's feelings, which is great since I love him too... The whole piece had a lot of tension in it, wondering how he was going to respodn to her or how he was going to tell her. I like your descriptions of both of their emotions and how they express them.

I did notice that you switched between past and present verb tenses a couple of times, and the formatting made it a bit difficult to read.

I really enjoyed this look into Remus's life even though it was sad.. :(

Author's Response: Thank you! I really appreciate you looking it up! I'm in such state of mind lately that I find it very easy to write Remus... ^_^
The thing about tenses, I started in one form, than changed my mind and started editing the whole thing, than changed my mind again... I'm a bit complicated when it comes to story flow (including tenses)... I'm not even sure myself how I want it to sound and than I improvise. Sometimes I get it right, sometimes I don't.. :)
Anyway, I'm very glad you liked it and thanks again for taking time to review!

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