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Review:severus_lover says:
Hi there, Kimaru-Sama from the forums here!

All i can say is wow.what a beautiful piece of writing.This is the second one that I've had to review from this challenge and they are both phenomenally written! I don't know what to say first!

The sheer description is breath taking. You have a very good writing style and it was so easy to get pulled into this! Bellatrix's characterization is flawless. I liked this part:

It was the only way to keep that terrible sound from pushing her sanity closer and closer to the edge of that deep, black hole.

Little did she know, her sanity had fallen into that deep crevice long before she had come to Azkaban. And truth be told, Bellatrix loved it there without even knowing where ‘there’ was.

and this one:

But for a fleeting moment, before the arrival of the summoned Death Eaters, the Dark Lord allowed her to place her hand against his chest, so that she could feel his heart beating. He was colder than she had imagined, but when his hand gripped her arm, a warmth like none other she had ever felt shot under her skin like a drug. All she knew for that one moment was incandescent ecstasy.

She was free.


May I also say i loved the quote at the beginning =D, wonderful work. So beautiful. You get a 10/10 from me! and on my favs list. *hugz*

kay~

Author's Response: Thank you so much! My smile is seriously stretching off my face at this point. (:

Bellatrix is one of my favorite characters. I love how dark she is, but I also love that she has a passion that most people would view as a good trait if that passion weren't for the darkest wizard of the time. Heh. So I'm glad I got her chracterized alright.

Thanks again! I'm so glad you enjoyed it.


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