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Review:harrylilyjames says:
OMG!! I'm not really into reading fics with Remus/Tonks as the main pairing, but I really really liked this one! Im surprised that it doesnt have more reviews...

I love the amount of detail you put into it and the emotions make it sooo much better.

You write the characters really well, and they dont seem to be OOC- not many writers can do that, so well done!

I didnt spot any grammar mistakes.

"Even I became dangerous once a month and I seriously doubted that he was more of a threat during his “time of the month” than I was."- I LOVED this line! =D [you got to have a bit of humour in a fic]

just one spelling mistake that caught my eye-
talking my hands into his- 'talking' should be 'taking' here. =]

I really enjoyed reading this story, it was soo cute!

hope you keep writing!
~harrylilyjames

Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed it! I actually based my characterization of Remus and Tonks off another fanfiction that I read. I forget the exact name now, but I think it was called "Shade" or something (it was on another site). I've realized that "researching" characters really helps you write them with more accuracy.

I really enjoyed the line that you picked out as well. One of my favorite comedic topics is the female time of the month. I just feel that it's something we can all laugh about because it's like this universally cruel joke.

Ah, I'll fix that mistake.

Thanks for reviewing!

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