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Review:ElissandrAnne says:
Hi Sandy!

First off... Dudley Dursley and Cho Chang? OMG!! You're spending too much time with the Anti Cho Club at SAYS. lololol. I know he's not as bad as his mother and father, but still... Oh well, I'll read on and maybe you'll be able to convince me that this ship can float more than the Titanic that night. :D

Seriously, it's a very good start. I like the tone of this story. It reminds me of some books and movies about 'old' cops. They think they are realists, and maybe they are, but they are cynical and bitter men too. Of course, Michael has a good reason to be. But still...

Anyway, it was nicely done.

-Anne

Author's Response: Thanks Anne! Nice to hear from you.
I like the idea of Dudley and Cho, JKR says she married a muggle so why not Dudley?

I don't know when I'll update this. I know what the next chapter is supposed to be, but I have a bit of writers block with this.

Thanks for the review!


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