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Review:flutterby271 says:
It's so sad to see what Remus and Tally have been reduced to... they went from being the best of friends (and something more, perhaps?) to two people who want nothing to do with each other. I really hope that Mark will make Remus realise how much he liked (and still likes?) her. And I love how Tally takes care of Remus, even though their situation's so awkward at the moment.

As for constructive criticism... I think your writing is so much better than the sort of writing you'd find in most of HPFF's stories. It's hard to find something specific you can improve on. Your spelling and grammar are flawless (as far as I can tell; I'm not a native speaker) and your dialogue's pretty good as well. I don't understand why you don't have more reviews - you should. Don't give up, though!

Great job! I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Wow. Probably the best review I've received so far. Thank you so much.

And yes, I've been a huge grammar freak, so you're compliment on that makes me slightly giddy.

Thanks again. Chapter five is on its way. :]

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