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Review:Ariana_Gryffindor says:
So hi.

i read this story and i have to say although i am not a big fan of harry/Cho story's, because from the books i see cho as very sureficial, even so i liked it a bit. it was battle and that's what caught me, as well as the vranticness of thought's.

Don't take this the wrong way but my bitof advice for this chapter/story is that i would hahve liked to see a bit more description. when i get entranced into a story i fell as if i too am there watching on. With your's i am sorry i didn't feel it.

it was a good jobzand my friend reading over my shoulder is now poking me and saying she liked it. She she says good job and so do i.

Stephanie

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the really great review! I have problems trying to go into more detail with stories and I always go too fast, skipping over important details and such. I'm trying to slow down with that sort of thing. I may edit this story to make it better, but I might not.

Thank your friend for me! It was awesome of her (and you) to read my story! Thanks!!


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