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Review:TokyoGal11 says:
Wow.

All I can say is wow...

I was a little confused at first, but I understand now.

Ok, so there are a few grammar/spelling errors- but they're easily fixed, and it seems like most of them are probably typos, so a quick run-through with spellcheck, or a one-shot beta would do nicely.

It is dark, as you said earlier, but it still has a readability to it that is very hard in angst stories. I'm sure that you have read at least one story where you get to the middle and say "I can't read anymore"- and while creating reactions in people is what writing is all about, there should be a limit, you know?

Also, your vocabulary and sentence structure made my day- after doing about five major grammar/spelling reviews, something like this makes me cry with happiness inside.

As a huge Severus fan, I really like the way that you portrayed him- he was so real- especially the deal about Lily. I think that a deal like that is something that he would do, and of course, bitterly regret forever after.

Really, not much to say- great story, keep up the good work!

-Rini

Author's Response: Hey, there, Tokyo Gal!

I was very happy to have you read my little story. And I am certainly glad you liked it. (I'll be slightly defensive for a moment and say that the story was painstakingly beta'd, so I was less than thrilled to see that some mistakes still got through. I appreciate your noticing; and I will get them fixed. It just feels a bit more complicated to make changes within a collaboration than it would if it were on my own site.)

Thank you so much for reviewing. I need to get back and check up on Isabella's adventures.


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