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Review:Firebird23 says:
Excellent read! I appreciate the development of Ginny's character. She's often made out to be this "dream girl" or this "ideal image" that Harry must cling onto for Love against Voldemort. That, or she's sidelined for Hermione -- and ugh.. goes off with Draco.

I thought that the final confrontation was a bit sudden, bringing me to the one point of ?criticism? I have. I feel that you could (and hopefully will) torture your readers further. The vital plot twists and surprises happen in your story awfully quickly - too quickly for it to really sink in and make the reader go: OMG! Right now, it's like a "Whoosh, what just happened in between there?".

I hope all is well for you and that you continue to wrote more HP fanfic. Though I've gotta ask: Digging potatoes? *laughs*

Author's Response: You hit it on the head 100%... I hate not finishing things and didn't want to leave people hanging but I was in the middle of a very rough pregnancy and I just wanted it over. It isn't as good as it could be but better done than 1 chapter to go ;-) Thanks for the honesty, it's much appreciated.

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