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Review:FireAngel42 says:
Wow, thats basically all I can say to this. It was one of the best fanfics I have ever read, I loved your describtion and I already have a huge love for Teddy, and I've never seen him portrayed like this but I've really been craving a story like this. I noticed some people meationed that this story reminded them of edger allen poe and I get that feel too. But also in the story when Teddy thinks about how the rain will wash away the blood, it made me completely think of Macbeth.

Now if there are people who haven't read that.. well then neither have I.. completely. But the short version of it(As far as I am) is there is a noblemen named Macbeth who is bestowed great honor by his cousin the king who gives him famous titles for saving his country in war. But Macbeth is visited by 3 witches who tell him that he will become king. The thought of becoming king takes over his mind until he decides to kill the king, he starts thinking it over and wanting to back out but his wife Lady Macbeth(Who is a very malicious woman) Makes him go through with it by telling him that if she had promised him to kill a child even if it were her own that she had brest fed, she would gash its brains out before breaking that promise.

But after he kills the king he cannot put the knifes with the servants to set them up because he is too horrofied by what he has done, so his wife does it. And as she washes her hands of the kings blood so says the water cleans us of our deed.

So that very long thing was just because I felt the same viciousness from Teddy that I did from Lady Macbeth, and when Teddy said the rain washed away the blood it almost seemed like me was saying that it washed away the dark deed he had done.

But anyway I'm rambling.. I loved your story its really something that most people don't do, but so many people love. It shows people at its worst, which is what a lot of people choose to deny about our race.

So I think I'll just stop now before I write too much(Oops too late) But I truly loved it.


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